Applying for AdvancedBuilder.... Again

[centermid16]

My username is centermid16
I have been playing on these server or about a year and a half now (joined June 4th)
My latest build: http://imgur.com/fantEpL
You can find the rest of my builds on the other DEAD topic that Krawkyz so gladly pointed out to me.



Thanks, Center

[kesteve]

Here's all your builds so far so that it's easier to see them all at once.

http://centermid16.imgur.com/all/

http://www.insomniacservers.com/index.php?action=dlattach;topic=970.0;attach=1263

http://www.insomniacservers.com/index.php?action=dlattach;topic=970.0;attach=1265

http://imgur.com/fantEpL

[centermid16]

Ah yes, thank you Kest

[MrFantasticalism]

I don't think I get a say in judging whether someone gets adv rank or not, but I do have some comments. I don't think you are ready, and I mean that in the nicest way possible. Your builds are missing something in general and you are going to have to figure it out on your own. Building a big building or just a building is going to keep you where you are. You have to build something that stands out and makes the viewer want to go visit that build. If you are confused about "something missing" then maybe check other advanced builders, vet builders and other high ranked people's maps for ideas. You will most likely see what I mean then. Other than that, keep up the good work

[MeatFeastMan]

Just felt like commenting here.
Center, adv has a slight aura surrounding it, meaning that it shows you are quite talented. Only two builds of them all appeal to me...
The final one, with some improvements organically, could bear some potential. You would probably need to refer to some of insomniac's other builds to gain advbuilder, and build your skills upon that.